The blue highlighter
I am looking on my desk And i see a blue highlighter when you draw the lines are as bright as the gleaming sun.
The lines are as thick as a tree.
It glitters with sparkles.
The blueness is as bright as the gleaming ocean.
The highlighter is icy cold.
It is brighter than the blue sky.
Great experimenting with using simile and metaphor language features. I really like the line you wrote "the lines are as bright as the gleaming sun". The words you used really helped me to see an image of the highlighter in my mind.
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